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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Help Stop The Violence


رقة القلب
04-05-2009, 02:12 PM
This is the poem which i presented in my school party

" by heart "
:):)

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Help Stop The Violence


It was anormal summer night
Or at least thats how it began
When a shot broke out during a fight
And lying dead was one man
Little did the murderer know
What he had caused people to go through
Or of the places that he would go
And that there were other people he hurt too


The mom was watching a t.v show
When the phone rang that night
When the officer told her what she needed to know
Of that fatal fight
She started to scream and she started to cry
And asked the lord why her son had to die
How was she to go on without her son
She could only visit his grave and that isnt fun


Five years down the road the mom is still in grief
There seems to be nothing that gives her some relief
Every night she cries herself to sleep
The wound that the crime caused was real deep
She quit going to work and then lost her job
Because of the effects when one man decided to rob


The violence needs to stop but we dont know where to begin
The will to change and help has to come from within
Until we stop and take a look at the pain we are causing
People will continue to get hurt and it just keeps evolving
The best way to help is not to hurt a single person
So the world gets better and doesnt worsen


At last i pray ," Dear God , Blees those who are left behind
And let them keep this in mind
We can not change what happened that sad day
But maybe we can stop the sorrows of tomorrow


******
BeSt WiShEs
:36_1_39:

maryame_monchida
06-05-2009, 03:51 AM
لا افهم الانجليزية
و لكن فهمت العنوان اظن كفى من العنف او شيئ من هذا القبيل
جزاك الله خير

رقة القلب
06-05-2009, 10:57 AM
لا افهم الانجليزية
و لكن فهمت العنوان اظن كفى من العنف او شيئ من هذا القبيل
جزاك الله خير


أهلاً عزيـزتـي مريومــــهـ :)
نورتِ ..

أي نعم يا عسل .. القصيدة بتحكي عن العنف
وأنا قدمتها باحتفال في مدرستي بس عن ظهر قلب " عن غيب يعني "

تسلميلي ع مرورك الرآئع يا عمـري
وهلا بيكِ :36_3_11:

بسمة الحياة "فلسطينية"
06-05-2009, 01:09 PM
بصراحة انا لما اشوف شي بالانجليزية ما بشوفه........
بس لفت انتباهي............
لقبك وعنوان القصيدة .........عن العنف
ولكن للاسف العنف في كل مكان.......

رقة القلب
06-05-2009, 09:07 PM
بصراحة انا لما اشوف شي بالانجليزية ما بشوفه........
بس لفت انتباهي............
لقبك وعنوان القصيدة .........عن العنف
ولكن للاسف العنف في كل مكان.......


هلا حـبـيـبـتـي ..
تسلميلي ان شا الله :36_3_11:
وللأسـف العنـــــف منـتـشـر بـكـل مكـان متل ما قلتِ ..

هلا بيكِ وبمرورك يا عسـل

♥•◦مهـاد◦•♥
06-05-2009, 09:44 PM
تسلمي يا ميس انجلش

حلو انك بتكتبي انجليزي كــــــمان ماخاب ضـــــــــــني فيك
thank you very much :36_3_11:

رقة القلب
06-05-2009, 09:53 PM
تسلمي يا ميس انجلش


حلو انك بتكتبي انجليزي كــــــمان ماخاب ضـــــــــــني فيك

thank you very much :36_3_11:



لك ان شا الله تؤبشيني شو بحبك :36_15_5:
الله يخيلي ياكي يا رب ..
بس يا عسل هي القصيدة موو من كتاباتي ..
بس انا بكتب انجلش برضو.. بحبوووو كتيييييير

هلا بيكِ يا غلاتي
وربي ما يحرمني نورك يا عسل انتِ

شمس الأمل
08-05-2009, 10:07 PM
yes it is a big messege which say :
please stop the violence <<
this is my always wishies
i really dont know from what i can start to talk about the violence <
but what just i havelike that :
i hope the world will prevent the wars >
thanks alot raqa for this feeling in this poem which talk about our situation
***
sun of hope

رقة القلب
09-05-2009, 12:04 AM
yes it is a big messege which say :
please stop the violence <<
this is my always wishies
i really dont know from what i can start to talk about the violence <
but what just i havelike that :
i hope the world will prevent the wars >
thanks alot raqa for this feeling in this poem which talk about our situation
***
sun of hope

Welcome my love
Realy im very pleased because you are here


Thanks alot mo dear

And
i want to tell you that i remember you all the time

best wishes for you from my heart :36_3_11:

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فرفوووشهـ
06-06-2011, 10:40 PM
You are great


Thank you my deer