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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : my poem...i wrote


kurapica
04-09-2005, 09:58 AM
My dairy of a strange summer night

In a quiet night
With a red sky, soft wind everything seems right

I sat there
On a big chair

I looked up in the sky
Suddenly, my eyes started to cry

While the thunder loudness captured the sight
When the lighting in front of me was bright

A lot of rain drops fail to wet my face
It was wet already from the first place

Allah, please forgive me!
Was the only thing I said.

So I start all over again and cry
I’m writing this and ending each line with a sigh

Everyone around me now is asleep
And I’m still here to write and weep
Asking the ONLY one who does not sleep
Asking Algabar Almojeeb

The lighting again appear
And from my eye falls another tear

Down falls the rain
I cry, and I have no words to explain
To the ONLY one I tell my pain
I ask him to forgive me again and again

I continue to cry and ask Allah for his mercy in all the ways
I ask you Allah to forgive me for what I did in the passed days

More tears from my eyes falls one after the other
I think and I start to wonder

I look around, I breathe, and then I remember something we all should never forget
It’s that my breath will stop one day, and that’s what we all regret

I look, to see the darkness of the night, and remember the darkness of the grave
So dark, no one can hold it, no one is much brave!

I remember the day that all what I did in my life in front of everyone will view
To where will it get me? I have no clue

The time passed while I’m writing this, it’s late enough, but I can’t fall asleep!
I feel something wired, a feeling…very deep!

This night is pretty strange…
It’s a summer night with thunder and rain…what a change?

About that I keep thinking
My thoughts wont do anything and nothing they will bring

It is all in Allah’s control…the rain…the wind
And we all know that it will all have an end!

And here I am, writing and trying to finish this poem
In my page, I’m going towards the bottom

This was the last day of July
It passed very fast, I do not know why

Time is passing; days after days, years after years…and tears follow tears

So again and forever, Allah I ask you to forgive me for all what I did
And forgive everyone who reads this and who ever already read

And finally now, I should go to my bed!


i hope u guys liked it, lol, by the way, i wrote this few ahours ago and i still never slept yet..lol it is 7 in the morning !hahaha

anyways, it was a very wried night i'm telling u, wow, like red sky hot wind and rain with thunder...lol the wheather is super crazy in here!

ALMOHANNAD
04-09-2005, 10:36 AM
كلام جميل أختي وذو مغزى .... :cool:




لكن ممكن ترجمي لي المكتوب إذا سمحت :mad: :rolleyes:


ههههههههههههههه

مشكورة أختي على المواضيع الجميلة التي تقومي بطرحها

وتقبلي تحياتي

kurapica
04-09-2005, 10:40 AM
ههههههه ماشي ان شاء الله احاول اترجمها..


جزاك الله خير!

Fire Bird
05-09-2005, 01:57 AM
hey Kurapica i have read many of those things in enshad and u were always the best in these things...
it is really fantastic and the words r amazing...the only thing that can i say after all what i said is thx for this poem and im waiting more...

kurapica
06-09-2005, 02:37 AM
well, i'd like to thank u for those nice words u've said about my writing ... it would make me write more and more, ...i do have more poems ...i'll add them in a sec!

Fire Bird
06-09-2005, 02:48 AM
ok kurapica im waiting these poems and dont be so late coz i wanna read them ok... and i dont think that one who wrights poem like this one needs motivation sis...

ok im really waitng them...

kurapica
06-09-2005, 03:04 AM
Friends Are Like Candles.
They Are Ready To Pay Their Life To Give You Light,
They Would Help You Even If You Are In A Big Fight,
I'm Sure That When Ever I Need You My Friend You Are There,
And I Know That You Are The Only One Who Always Care,
I'm Sorry I Left You Alone And I Went Away,
But It Was Not My Choice And I Did Not Have Anything To Say,
We Both Had That Fear
In Your Eyes There Was A Sad Tear,
Our Good Memories Together Is My Best Dream,
I Always Sing It , I Created Its Own Theme,
I'm Not Sure If I Will Ever See You Again,
I Miss You As Much As The Dessert Needs Rain,
I Send You My Best Wishes With The Passing Wind,
And Let The Birds Tell You That You Are My Best Friend,
"i Will Never Forget You" Was Your Last Word,
From That Moment, It Was The End Of My World,
You Are My Greatest Friend
Our Friendship Will Never Have An End.

Fire Bird
06-09-2005, 03:10 AM
oh plz let me thank u from my heart sis... they r really nice and i hope that i rerad more.. and let me ask u a question plz.. was u talking to me in enshad in قدم وردة للعضو يللي تحبه when u said the peoms r there now????

and sorry if u didnt said that for me and thx agian...

kurapica
06-09-2005, 04:09 AM
lol, yup, u smart enough to know,>>>i was talking to u ..by the way, i still have some more peoms>>>:)

Fire Bird
06-09-2005, 04:11 AM
u have more???? than wat r u waitng for???? i wanna read them all c'mon...

kurapica
06-09-2005, 04:12 AM
sure...there


I know that it will be the end...
Because you never been a true friend,
At first you looked trustful and shy,
but then i noticed that all of that was a lie,
All the time that passed and the things we had,
i never expected you to be that bad,
Do believe who ever acts angel and bright,
they all turn bats and evils at night,
Maybe you did not know that you broke my heart,
you smashed it into a hundred part,
I thought that you are a friend but you are not,
I'M ENDING OUR FAILURE FRIENDSHIP WITH A DOTE,
Do you really feel happy and glad,
when you make others pissed off and mad?
how dare toy call me your friend and you never been mine?
without you I'm sure that I'm gonna be fine,
i never expected this to be caused by someone i thought was a friend,
this is the DARKEST AND WORST END!!!

kurapica
06-09-2005, 04:14 AM
one more thing..i still have more>>:)

Fire Bird
06-09-2005, 04:25 AM
i really dunno wat to say coz i said all the nice words that can be said..... but at least i still can tell u thank u very much forall wat u doing for this forum and for me by giving me those poems...

MORE>MORE>MORE>MORE

kurapica
06-09-2005, 04:29 AM
lol, what a strong way of begging...lol, okay here is more



Have You Ever Felt It When You Die?
When Your Soul Is Leaving And Saying Goodbye..
When You Are Left Alone In Your Grave,
No One Comes To Visit , Not One Is That Brave,
When You Wait For The Others For You To Cry,
When You Want Everyone Else To Know What It Means When You Die,
When You Sit There Waiting For Tears,
No One Remembered You Weeped Before A Lot Of Years,
When You Remember The Sunlight,
When You Remember The Stars At Night,
When You Remember The Singing Birds
When You Remember The Nice Words,
When You Remember The Smell Of The Fresh Air
When You Remember Friends And Who Used To Care
When You Wish To Be Alive Again
To Smell The Flowers And Feel The Rain,
When You Used To Slime With A Happy Face,
When You Used To Play With Friends And Race,
But It Is All Gone Now,
You Are Stuck There , I Don't Know How,
With A Place Full Of Soil And Dust Filling The Place,
You Cannot Move,there Is No Space
It Is All When It Is Time For Your Soul To Fly !

Fire Bird
07-09-2005, 02:41 AM
When You Remember The Smell Of The Fresh Are Air
salam kurapica... thanx for all what u writing and can i ask a question plz...
u said: the smell of the fresh are air... how u used are?? my question is:Do we have to use are instead of is with smell,taste...etc
and thanx another time and can i know if there r rules for writing this or wat???

kurapica
07-09-2005, 06:19 AM
okay about the ARE thing..lol, my bad that was my mistake...about the rules...na i do not think that it does, it does not even have to rheme, but i guess it should make sense!!! mmmmmmmmm ...so yeah..

NaNa اللطيفة
07-09-2005, 11:28 AM
It is very good....بس للأسف ما فهمت ... والله يبارك فيك أخي الطائر الناري على الردود الطيبة ... بس ما في غيرك وأختي كورابيكا يعرف انجليزي.....

Fire Bird
07-09-2005, 08:35 PM
It doesnt matter with me if anyone knows english or not what i care about is to read more of these cooooooooooooool poems...

plz kurapica write more coz im practising to write as u r writing so plz continue even if there is no one reading just me ok....

im waiting..

kurapica
09-09-2005, 12:51 AM
OMG...i'd be really proud of that....:) thaaaaaaaank u